LOST

After the fluorescent shops and the snatched music,
the side street was damp and dark –
but a bag of chips and a manipulative adult
made the emptiness freedom.
Waterways were trawled and the usual,
time-dishonoured suspects questioned.
Down river, high tides returned her nine year old body.
The funeral cortège was a carriage and horses
and the local press was effulgent.
But gossip condemned her single mother,
living in a hostel on benefit.
The killer lived two floors down,
an estranged father of daughters –
a violent drunk, unemployed, unschooled.
Victim, mother and murderer
threaten the equivocal city.
Losers and losing
challenge its achievements.
Death is only one result of murder.
Remember sweet Fanny Adams – mutilated,
immortalised, profaned unthinkingly!
The murder and rape of children
seem beyond words, understanding, iniquity
– and another’s lack of love or the means to love
is out of our grasp, lost beyond finding.
John H
June 24, 2009Can I commend LOST, with its combination of past and present murders, victims and perpetrators? Anywhere you start this is a great poem – but the beginning is a chilling combination of innocent details and menace, which must be returned to when you’ve finished the whole.
Gil Franke
June 27, 2014A tragic tale, told in stark and brutal simplicity; a too common plot revealed in staccato images; a dramatic poem requiring reflection and attention. Thanks for re-posting!