SILENT POOL, MARCH 2013
The pool is off the Dorking-Guildford road,
at the foot of the North Downs; is fed
from a spring, which seeps through chalk and flint;
is so-called for allegedly no birds sing
in this glade of ash, oak and yew;
a place of legend, of Druidic worship,
rumoured deep enough to drown secrets.
A sharp March wind rattles twigs and branches.
By the side of a flint pathway – that leads
to the top of the Downs with its Pilgrims’ Way,
an old drovers’ road – is a second world war
‘pillbox’, its unadorned and concrete
symmetry stark, a forgotten reminder
of fears of invasion from Bonaparte
to Hitler – not without reason in this land,
like many, pillaged over and over.
Edward Thomas, after his breakdown,
cycled westward, a century ago,
from Clapham to the Quantocks in pursuit
of spring in turbulent weather like this.
That laureate of the moment – the hoot
of an owl, grass stilled in the heat – briefly stopped here
the year before he wrote his first poem,
two years before he enlisted, three
before a shell blast killed him at Arras.
John Huddart
January 8, 2014A Silent Pool that provokes such storytelling – I expect it similarly inspired the Druids as they ritually sacrificed a goat here, a shepherd there…And speaking of sacrifice, enter Edward Thomas, on his way to a sacrifice of another kind. The “laureate of the moment” is a fine and fitting label – and one which also can be attached to your own verse.
David Selzer
January 8, 2014Thank you.