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  • HELL’S MOUTH

    Though all the lanes leading to Hell’s Mouth are lined

    with parked cars nevertheless we find a place

    in the official park between a van

    hiring out surfing gear and one selling

    ice cream. The path to the beach is crammed with folk,

    and the strand itself littered with bodies

    and surf boards, almost obscuring the breakers

    from the distant North Atlantic everyone

    has come to see or ride. We retreat,

    noting the orderly, overgrown ruins

    of the RAF air gunnery range.

     

    Some mobile phones here will roam to Ireland.

    The world, at certain latitudes, has become

    a small, crowded space. The popular place name,

    it is claimed, was bestowed by English sailors

    fearing the hell of the surf, its deceiving

    misty spray, the desert of the hinterland,

    and the ship-wrecking maw of the bay

    with jagged cliffs at either end like molars.

    The Welsh name – Porth Neigwlmay be translated,

    ‘Gateway of Clouds’.

     

     


    2 responses to “HELL’S MOUTH”


    1. Pat Rogerson Avatar
      Pat Rogerson

      David…..another trip down memory lane. Hell’s Mouth appears not to have changed since we regularly visited when the children were young.
      Time for a return visit maybe.

    2. John Williams Avatar
      John Williams

      I feel a lot more could be made of the line, ‘Some mobile phones here will roam to Ireland’, which is tremendous and could very well serve as a constructive metaphor for the entire piece. It’s unfortunate to see such a line discarded in favour of a references to the destructive side of nature in ‘deceiving/misty spray’, hellish surf and ‘shipwrecking bay….with jagged cliffs…like molars’, and ending in the ‘Gateway to Clouds’.

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