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  • ‘CROSSING THE BROOK’: J.M.W. TURNER

    In the foreground is the brook, the Tamar

    not far from its source, deep woods on either side

    and close, almost a canopy of shade.

    A young woman has crossed. She is barefoot,

    still holds up her skirts as if drying them.

    She has turned to a mastiff that has stopped

    in mid-stream. Another young woman,

    her companion presumably, is resting

    on the other bank, next to a white bundle.

    Some ten yards or so behind her is a cave.

     

    ***

     

    In the middle-ground is an aqueduct

    or viaduct as if this were Provence:

    the artist’s invention to draw the eye,

    to bridge the canvas, to evoke the mood.

    And his vision – for a hundred years later

    in Calstock downstream a railway viaduct

    was built to trundle ore from the tin mines

    down to the navy yards at Devonport.

     

    Turner, from his travels in the West Country

    at the new century’s start, painted,

    in an eighteenth century French style,

    this oil of the Tamar Valley in summer.

    The painting was exhibited first

    the year of the Battle of Waterloo:

    a sort of English landscape to celebrate

    what was a sort of English victory.

    We can almost but not quite see the sea,

    and imagine Plymouth, the Sound, and folk

    strolling complacently on the Hoe –

    the ships of the line, sails furled, at anchor.

     

    ***

     

    The  dog will continue to stand its ground,

    woofing for frolics. The exhausted friend

    will still silently refuse to move. The barking

    and the young woman’s teasing laughter

    will echo from the cave.


    One response to “‘CROSSING THE BROOK’: J.M.W. TURNER”


    1. Ashen Venema Avatar

      … We can almost but not quite see the sea …

      … We can almost but not quite see the painting …

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