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  • ANOTHER PLACE REVISITED AT LOW WATER


    ‘It is no hero, no ideal, just the industrially reproduced body of a middle-aged man trying to remain standing and trying to breathe.’ Anthony Gormley

     

    They are still standing and their slow carapace

    of barnacles breathes. Small pools of eaten

    razor clams and star fish lie at their feet – fry

    dart amongst seaweed fronds and the dead.

    An off shore breeze brings the calls of distant

    sea birds close. The RNLI flag stiffens

    and plastic kites, on the slight headland, swoop –

    but the cumulus clouds and the con trails,

    across the Atlantic, are almost still.

    Wind turbines proliferate on Burbo Bank

    and, beyond, along the North Wales coast.

    Over the horizon, the world awaits

    high tide. Meanwhile, on tricky sands, we move

    with care among these icons of cast-iron

    steadfastness and promise.

     

     

     


    2 responses to “ANOTHER PLACE REVISITED AT LOW WATER”


    1. Ashen Avatar

      I haven’t experienced Gormley’s casts, but your poem gives me an impression of the spectacular impact they must have on that shore, looking out towards the horizon.

    2. Clive Watkins Avatar
      Clive Watkins

      I’ve never managed to see these figures, despite two attempts (bad weather, illness), so your poem intrigues. I particularly liked the ending: “Over the horizon, the world awaits / high tide. Meanwhile, on tricky sands, we move / with care among these icons of cast-iron /steadfastness and promise”.

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