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  • THE SCENERY OF DREAMS

    Where the estuary suddenly narrows

    and the river begins its slow bends

    through the valley, white smoke is drifting

    from a thicket of trees where egrets roost.

    The birds are rising, like sudden flags

    fluttered, bright cloths flung into the air,

    their dry, rattling calls echoing

    across the empty river just at its flow.

     

    Above where the sage hills become lilac

    mountains, beyond where the invaders

    ever went, high on the summer pastures

    with the sheep fattening for the valley,

    the shepherd sleeps in a ruined cottage

    and dreams of wild goats nobody counts.

    He does not hear the shotgun’s blast nor breathe

    the black smoke that gouts from the tumbled stones.

     

    She saw the dark plume first then the yellow-white

    scatter of the sheep then the lick of orange

    and last the birds over the river

    and the wisp of smoke drift as her boat dipped

    and bucked against the now ebbing tide.

    The thud of water kept her in ignorance

    as the flags snapped at the stern. She steered

    towards discovery and desolation.

     

     

    Note: The title is taken from the last paragraph of Robert Louis Stevenson’s Dedication to his friend, Charles Baxter, in the first edition of his novel, ‘Kidnapped’ – http://robert-louis-stevenson.classic-literature.co.uk/kidnapped/ebook-page-02.asp


    4 responses to “THE SCENERY OF DREAMS”


    1. Ian Craine Avatar
      Ian Craine

      What superb use of language.

    2. Hugh Powell Avatar
      Hugh Powell

      And a strong sense of mystery and the impending. Modestly ignorant, I am intrigued by the reference to RLS in the tags, and deduce that a fine blend of known topography, literature and the imagination awaits…….

      1. David Selzer Avatar

        I think you’re entitled to be ignorant, even immodestly so. The title is taken from the last paragraph of Robert Louis Stevenson’s Dedication to his friend, Charles Baxter, in the first edition of his novel, ‘Kidnapped’ – http://robert-louis-stevenson.classic-literature.co.uk/kidnapped/ebook-page-02.asp. In response to your comment and that (orally) of another critical friend I’ve put a note re the origin of the title and thus the tag on the relevant website page.

    3. Alan Horne Avatar
      Alan Horne

      Thanks for including the Stevenson reference. The poem seems to have all sorts of layers, which are multiplied by a reading of the ‘Kidnapped’ dedication.

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