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  • ACHILLES’ HEELS

    On the short strand where the Red Wharf Bay Sailing

    and Water Sports Club has its clubhouse,

    the salvaged HMS Thetis was grounded

    the day Chamberlain declared war on Hitler.

     

    The last human remains were slow marched,

    with muffled drums, up the narrow, high banked lane.

    For want of an escape drill and a pinhole

    ninety nine men had died from carbon monoxide.

     

    Raging Achilles, scion of the Greeks,

    prince of the Myrmidons, slayer of Hector,

    was son to Thetis, a nymph of the sea.

     

    The First Lord took no blame, kept secret the

    misapplied drop of enamel paint,

    the panic – and compensated no one.

     

    With muffled drums up the straitened lane

    they bore the dead that sunny Sunday –

    before the beaches were edged with tank traps,

    the coasts sealed with barbed wire.

     

     

     


    2 responses to “ACHILLES’ HEELS”


    1. John Chapman Avatar
      John Chapman

      First Lords as with many more in high office are there to blame, never to take the blame. The lowly amongst us are there for that purpose.

    2. John Huddart Avatar
      John Huddart

      A sad story and a shocking end for so many. The full story of HMS Thetis/Thunderbolt repays studying on so many levels. I was intrigued to learn that Ice Station Zebra employed the blocked inspection pin hole as a plot device.

      And the first casualty of war has often been…….

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