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  • CROW CASTLE

    Something – among the sparse, medieval ruins
    silhouetted against a powder blue sky –
    is catching the sun intermittently.
    Something, at the top of the steep hill – from here
    by the town’s tumultuous rapids
    more than a mile away – large enough
    to flash in daylight like a lighthouse beacon.
    A figure appears then two – small sticks
    among the stones – and the light has shifted
    from the stark gatehouse to the empty keep.
    It shines steady and bright as a prying star –
    then sun, wind, whim change and there is nothing.

    Perhaps it was a weather balloon fallen
    on the crags, forecasting all but its own
    demise. We climbed there – we three –
    more than thirty years ago and saw
    the summer valleys oozing sea green,
    the layers and layers of limestone cliffs.
    Maybe we will climb it again – with a fourth
    and fifth. Who would have predicted the light
    twinkling so like a star!

     

     

     


    4 responses to “CROW CASTLE”


    1. Ashen Venema Avatar

      I like the mystery.

    2. Alan Horne Avatar
      Alan Horne

      Yes, I agree with Ashen. Both this and your poem Odysseus this month make use of unclear images seen at a distance, and I like the way this doesn’t resolve. ‘Prying star’ is a great phrase.

      1. David Selzer Avatar

        The phrase ‘prying star’ is from Wordsworth’s poem about Crow Castle COMPOSED AMONG THE RUINS OF A CASTLE IN NORTH WALES – http://www.bartleby.com/145/ww707.html. Is not putting it in quotation marks or providing a footnote cheating? I try to keep the work on the web page uncluttered.

    3. Alan Horne Avatar
      Alan Horne

      No, David, it just means I need to read more Wordsworth. Have just looked at the poem “Composed Among … ” which I hadn’t read before. Strikes me as very unassuming with some lovely delicate effects. Thanks for directing my attention to it.

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