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  • GUILT

    All the best places were forbidden, disused,
    decrepit, far from net curtains, aunts,
    mother spoiling a lost fatherless boy.
    Best was the brickworks. We thrust, like commandos
    sharp with twigs and fear, through undergrowth
    into the yards. Blackberries burst, purpling
    in private summers. Once, I hid in reeds.
    A sundew glistened. A horsefly hovered.
    I heard my companions calling, calling…
    My mother met us raging, loving before
    friends who had fathers. Shame prickled my face
    the blackberries had stained.

     

     

     


    4 responses to “GUILT”


    1. Mary Clark Avatar
      Mary Clark

      Evocative of childhood’s raging emotions and search for self-identity. One of your best, I think.

    2. Hugh Powell Avatar
      Hugh Powell

      A fine twin to Heaney – more powerful in its evocation of your childhood’s bringing up.

    3. John Huddart Avatar
      John Huddart

      Hugh is right – and it is right to re-work childhood, holding hands with mentors such as him.

    4. Alan Horne Avatar
      Alan Horne

      I liked this because it’s so stripped down. “Once I hid in reeds.” Five words, but you could puzzle over just that bit for ages.

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