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  • THE OLD SEAWATER BATHS, PARKGATE…

    …is now a bosky car park – owned and maintained

    by the borough council, and enhanced

    by two charities: one for birds, the other

    for history and the built environment.

    Over the remains of the wall along

    what was once the seaward side of the baths

    is a belvedere across bird-teeming hectares

    of reeds and runnels, and, beyond, the long

    low mauve and lilac of Halkyn Mountain.

    Though no Ur or Babylon, this small space

    and its short history is a metaphor

    for humankind’s enterprising and

    egregious journey to date through the cosmos.

     

    At the head of the Dee estuary were

    salt marshes with a navigable channel

    through to the international port of Chester.

    The marshes were drained, filled and the land

    ‘reclaimed’ – as if the sea had stolen it –

    to build ships, and make chains and anchors.

    Silt began to block the channel so the river

    was canalised – which has caused the east coast

    of the estuary to silt and become

    marshland. As the hectares of reeds became

    multitudes making the sea a distant,

    occasional thing the baths had to close.

     

    They were most popular in the ‘Thirties,

    despite the Depression and the long grey lines

    of unemployed men in flat caps. Bathers

    came via the railway – now gone –

    or by car. There was parking for a thousand

    Rileys, and Rovers, and Singers, the sun

    reflecting from their bonnets in fields

    next to the baths, and now pastoral again.

    And, like any ancient civilisation,

    on a ruined wall is a graffito:

    in a ‘Thirties’ three dimensional font,

    and shades of aquamarine – ‘The Old Seabaths’.

     

     


    2 responses to “THE OLD SEAWATER BATHS, PARKGATE…”


    1. Harvey Lillywhite Avatar
      Harvey Lillywhite

      The language here is luxurious. For the first time in my life, I looked up ‘belvedere’: from the Italian for ‘beautiful view’. I, who love to look at words slowly and carefully, should have known. But I’m like a kid in a sandbox with this poem…so much to love. AND, the poem makes a pretty bold move:

      …this small space

      and its short history is a metaphor

      for humankind’s enterprising and

      egregious journey to date through the cosmos.

      Can you do that in a poem, I asked??? I thought this was my job as reader, as chief decoder. It made me laugh. Of course, a poem can do anything. I like how this part opens the poem to humankind’s enterprising. Wow, what a leap. So thanks for this journey, rather more like a sumptuous meal at a great restaurant. When’s your next book coming out?

    2. Catherine Reynolds Avatar
      Catherine Reynolds

      This is beautifully penned, David. Your imagery of this scene and it’s history is captivating. I particularly like the notion of, ‘The marshes were drained, filled and the land ‘reclaimed’ – as if the sea had stolen it’. An enduring statement of the Holocene. Mankind seems to have stolen so much and yet the environment readjusts and comes calling once more to claim its own. Parkgate, once in my late 20’s, the scene of many weekend glories at Neston HC. Shirts as pink as the shrimp once harvested there.

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