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  • CARNIVAL

    Sudden heavy rain scatters on the skylights

    of the hotel’s restaurant – and finds a small gap

    in the putty last summer baked biscuit-dry.

    A drop falls then another onto the floor’s tiles.

    The apologetic waitress carries

    my Pastis, Vittel and Madeleines

    to a dry table near the door. I follow

    with the ashtray and packet of Gitanes.

    She asks me if later I am going to see

    the carnival in the square. I say, ‘Peut être’.

     

    I have just finished my liqueur, eaten my cakes,

    and am about to light up another Gitanes,

    when two early, sodden, loud revellers

    enter the restaurant. The smoke and noise

    of the carnival follows them briefly.

    I think of ‘Une Soirée Au Carnaval’,

    that surreal painting by Henri Rousseau,

    part time artist, full time customs officer.

     

    A woman and a man in fancy dress

    stand in front of dark, calm, leafless trees.

    He looks at us, she at him. He is Pierrot,

    she Columbine in a peasant bonnet.

    A street lamp has been lit. In the clear, dry sky,

    a full moon and scattered stars are shining.

    There is only the soft soughing of the wind.

    Though they are dressed for joy, there seems to be

    no merriment. They are impassive, still.

    Meanwhile, in the round window of what might be

    a shelter in the wintry copse where

    Columbine and Pierrot patiently wait,

    lit by the street lamp is an older man’s head.

    He has a moustache, and wears a peaked cap.

     

    The new customers are dressed in costume too: he

    as Marie Antoinette, observing

    the crumbs of Madeleine still on my plate,

    and winking; she as Louis XV,

    smirking at my apparent disapproval

    of such contraband merriment. ‘Après nous

    – le deluge!’ she guffaws.

     

     


    One response to “CARNIVAL”


    1. Harvey Lillywhite Avatar
      Harvey Lillywhite

      A scene between the weight of rain and the weight of memory. A drop falls—another—then figures emerge, half-formed, as if from Rousseau’s canvas. The carnival lurches forward, absurd, inevitable. Pierrot and Columbine stand in frozen silence; Marie Antoinette winks. And the past seeps through, as water through old putty, indifferent to disapproval. The poem lingers where the revelry and the ruin touch—where the madeleine’s last crumb dissolves, and the flood is always just ahead. I might hear Proust?

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